Friday, November 19, 2010

I'm to leave now







 By: Ali Taha Alnobani

© 2011 by THE BIRD(http://www.thebirdali.com




I'm to leave now
A tall ghost is carrying my bag
A long street is walking behind me
A mad merchant bought my smiles
And no water to renew the dusk
I can't have my step begun
Even if the rain washed my tears
***
I'm to leave now
Can I have a deep look at your eyes?
Can I take my dreams, your smile
And my dried red rose?
Can I keep your image in my mind?
***
I'm to leave now
The hungry clouds and the angry trees
Scanned my face with a magic brush
To find the sleepy nice angel
But the narrow path through the forest
Had had fun alone
***
When I walk away
      I'll pray to god for you to be happy
      I'll collect wild flowers
      And hold them around your picture
     I will watch the river
    May be a bit of his sails bring me your compassionate voice
     ***
      It is not necessary to be together
     If gardens want to paint your picture alone
     If clouds like to rain for you alone
     But forgive me
Beads of rain could be mixed with my tears
***


It is not necessary to be together
If the day needs something
And the night needs another
If a baby comes to have life
And does not find a mother
***
 Do you remember
When I told you the story of crazy traveler
Who made a sail of his sweetheart dress
And a prayer of her words
And sang in all languages of the world
Then gods blessed him
That was the prophecy
      I've seen in your eyes
***
     It is not necessary to be together
     I can see you wherever I go
    I can hear your voice in the storm
   And in the calm evening
   ***

61 comments:

  1. this are so lovely!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. this is beautiful

    Ildiko from WAYN.

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  3. That is really beautiful touched me to my heart thank you for sharing it with me Ali Taha. BLESS YOU

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  4. Rosa María from WAYNSeptember 5, 2011 at 12:26 PM

    Ali, thank you very much for sharing this beautiful poem and remember...

    It is not necessary to be together
    I can see you wherever I go
    I can hear your voice in the storm
    And in the calm evening,
    I have seen myself in your eyes...

    Monday, Sept. 5.2011

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  5. will remember those words forever

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  6. Ali
    Nagyon szép ez a vers,megfogta a lelkemet.
    Köszönöm szépen.
    Ági

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  7. Ali, pls continue writing...I am proud to be your friend,,....God bless you

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  8. thanks man for the wonderful poem and the inspirational words u've shared with us thanks again

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  9. maravilhoso poema

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  10. No, it is necessary to be together! No excuse is a valid one to justify our separation from loved ones. When it's a real love, it can conquer every obstacle, overcome every hardship. Never say goodbye to your love!

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  11. Thank you Ali for sharing with me. wonderful train of thought ....Anna

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  12. I v beeing true there after 40 years of marriage and i can say its like dieing and still i remember cos she is not going out of my mind and still my heart is open , but every day is till crying and not knowing why

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  13. Thanks Ali for Sharing Wonderful Poem, and for being my friend on here.,Take Care and Have A Great Day.

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  14. Your imagination is running riot,
    No love is important in this world,
    Your Wife came into your world
    because of love turned lusty love,
    Your kids came into being, because of lusty love and You became a Parent by accident,
    The Driving force of true love comes from your own heart as given directly by the God almighty, But it is only easy to summon that real love through Lord(Perfect Master=Guru=Practical Teacher, not just Teacher) by his own Will & Compassionate love, But that True love is bartered with your real Devotion to Him (Lord), That True Devotion you give unconditionally to Him and makes Him give you His Grace and Love, in return, which is bound to snowball into manifold, God is a very shy person, so He operates through the Lord ( Man in body and God in breath), And That's the true love you gullibles, don't be deceived by any woman of this world, only they take you away from the True love by deception, but the Real Master Takes you back into Love & devotion to God dwelling in your Sacred Heart, I can vouch it for you through my own personal experience, like many billions now around the world, who are not bound by Religions, which are deceptive for mankind, nor are they conditioned by worldly affairs taking place right now. I am 70 years Young now living the Life with Dignity, Integrity & Honesty, Healthy, Wealthy & Wise, Peaceful and Prosperous, and Happy and Joyfull with Blissful Life - K.Selva (Kandar Selvarathnam) PS. Ask me if you want that Love & Grace & I'm ever prepared to help and guide you by His Grace.

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  15. There is nothing worse in life then to leave a loved one. Tragic and heart breaking. Thank you for sharing.

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  16. Great poem thanks Ali,but i feel sad about leaving...it really feel sad..but i know all of us will leave and be together again in other life..

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  17. Sad and beautiful, so beautiful and painful...

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  18. Very nice. Thank you for sharing.

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  19. tyukanyo56ster@gmail.comSeptember 5, 2011 at 11:19 PM

    it is very beautiful

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  20. Thank you Ali for sharing with me. wonderful train of thought ..Lujzi

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  21. I was very touched by reading your poem, it's so sad, but also so sweet and sensitive...love is the most beautiful feeling and that's why is so hard when you loose it.
    Thank you so much for let it me read it and...don't loose your hope...i wish you all the best!

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  22. Thanks for that and we need more.

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  23. Yes that it, only death can set true lovers
    apart. thanks nice but it makes ppl sad.

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  24. It is so sad... brought tears to my eyes... But i love it, what a beautiful poem!

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  25. Great poem,thank you!Very beautiful!

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  26. Thank you so much Ali for sharing your talent through the many poems you have posted and shared to each one of us . . .. you will always remain in our thoughts . . . your dreams and the world peace you envisioned to have . . if each of us would partake to be one in that dream then peace will be achieved . . . good luck .

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  27. a beautiful,sad poem!

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  28. YEA ...GREAT WORDS < Thank you for sharing your POEM

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  29. GREAT HEART TOUCHING WORDS....

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  30. Thank you for sharing these strong sentiments!

    malo Miguelito your friend from WAYN!

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  31. Big hands of Plunges.............superb!!!!!!!

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  32. Salutes for you thoughts.........

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  33. You alway's find a way to speak to the Heart.

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  34. Ali..
    Thanks for sharing these wonderful words

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  35. very nice dear friend, I like all your poetry. And I'll give my poem for you about love.
    Thanks so much for everything of you.
    May GOD always bless you and your family, amen.

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  36. Here, for you ...
    **
    An advice in life, have love

    There is a life, and sure there is a reaction.
    And there is a reciprocal response.
    Like newborn babies,
    There is a movement accompanied by cries of
    **
    And, how to get on with life,
    We must have a goal,
    How to live a meaningful,
    For ourselves and others
    **
    Achieve goals and be happy
    How to succeed in life,
    Life is hard a lot of obstacles,
    Not as easy as we reverse the hands.
    **
    There is only one force many do not know,
    That could make success in life,
    And that can make us smile in joy,
    And all can be happy, it is "LOVE"

    ** by Tatsuko **

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  37. Sad poem... the reflektion of the feelings from all heart!

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  38. Grammar could be worked on, but otherwise it's understandable and very nice. Thankz for the share!

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  39. meu amigo poeta que lindo poema
    eu adorei suas belas palavras.

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  40. Beautiful and pulls at my heart Tears for the words you have written and the pain in your heart.
    Peace to you.

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  41. This is so interesting, all those word combinations and images. Thank you for this lovely poem.
    linda milgate

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  42. deep write on walking away,, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
    Poet Destroyer ~ A

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  43. nice thoughts you have penned in this write I am to leave now, Ali
    Dr.Ram Mehta

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  44. A very beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. :)
    Catie Lindsey

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  45. Hello Ali. I liked your poem. You have used a lot of imagery.
    Tahera Mannan

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  46. I like this poem and I think its your best ,,,

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