Friday, June 3, 2011

Sofia's Masterpiece Story


By: Ali Taha Alnobani
© 2011 by Ali Taha Alnobani

A lot of people I knew
Tried to cross long bridges
Sofia's masterpiece story
Ended among her princes
They wished her to describe the picture
But she forgot her eyes
Upon the bridges' fences
A rhyme made of life
Attacked her burned senses
I adored Sofia
But the trees imposed its tenses
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A lot of people I knew
Tried to cross long bridges
Sami stepped looking at his feet
Imagining a wonderful meet
But his crowded memory
Screamed with endless sad voice
Telling the shaggy funeral seat
With nothing written on the sheet
He stopped in the middle
Suffering from his head heat
Still there now
With his miserable beat

***
A lot of people I knew
Tried to see the other side
To find an other dusk
Or to have an honest guide
Some of them saw their way
But the others lost their ride
***

41 comments:

  1. Thank you for passing this along, very very enlightening...
    Bob Chapman
    Rollix100@gmail.com

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  2. Thank you Ali my Friend,
    There is so much that is said here. So much we can all stop and reflect on that would serve our futures very well.
    My best wishes to you always,
    Jeff

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  3. Very Nice,Thank You for sending it to me.Your Friend,John lane

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  4. Yes, indeed. That is so much being said. Would it not be good that one to pause for a moment, reflect and recharge.

    Blessings.

    Antonie

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  5. Thanks my dear Ali, is a wonderful thought

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  6. Simple but sincere THANKS for being able to read it.

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  7. Thanks for the story, good reading.

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  8. its really lovely a lot being said here thank you for sharing.

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  9. Thank you! The real-life story

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  10. Nice.I like it..thank you for sending.

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  11. Thanks for your story...your feelings are so negative towards women...have you been lonely for years...mr. Dreamer
    Amanda
    South Africa

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  12. T H A N K S for sending it to me. I liked the story and the picture very much...
    Andrea
    Slovak Republic

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  13. Ali.. You have an amazing way with words Mashallah. Love it
    Thanx so much
    Farha
    Kenya

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  14. przeczytałam i podobało mi się to co napisałeś pozdrawiam cię
    Krystyna
    Poland

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  15. Very nice...thank you for sending...!!!

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  16. Very nice...thank you for sending...!!!
    Janine.
    Dominican Republic.

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  17. Very nice the whole page!
    And very sad!
    Sincerely,
    Valent Francis

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  18. Thank you, that you sent me!
    It is very instructive as that!
    Thank You Ali!
    Sincerely,
    Francis Valent

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  19. Thank u so much for sharing this with me...

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  20. Indeed very nice thought.thank you for sending.ALLAH bless you...

    REEMO FROM JORDAN

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  21. You are doing a wonderful job here,
    Appreciated!!
    Suchitra
    India

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  22. Thank you! I like it. All the best!
    Ирина
    Ukraine

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  23. I know the Sofia's history, es very nice!!!!!!!
    Audita
    El Salvador

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  24. thank u Mr. the story you sent, many lessons I got, it's the truth.
    Mercyj
    Myanmar

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  25. great poet, thanks for sharing

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  26. thanks its a nice poem.

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  27. Thanks for sharing your masterpiece.
    Its really enlightening.
    Satra
    Philippines

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  28. Your work is very good, congratulations

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  29. Very nice Ali.. I enjoyed reading Sofia's Masterpiece Story very much. Please keep sharing your poetry with the world.
    Kimberley
    London

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  30. Very nice poem, congratulations and I wish you have a great success in your activity,
    Justinian
    Romania

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  31. Thank you for sharing this story brother Ali. It is so sad that most lost their ride... and ended up lonely and very sad and full of regrets, without direction in life and without friends to bridge the gaps of time. Let us all learn from this, and not make the same mistakes ourselves. May YAHUWAH Almighty Loving YA, The Eternal Loving King of YAsarel bless you! The Light is YAHUWAH! Where His Name dwells, is Life in abundance and Restoration of ALL THINGS and ALL people and a Sure Hope for a Good Future and Eternal Life at the end of this one. :-)
    Electro
    South Africa

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  32. Zlata Povh, CroatiaSeptember 4, 2011 at 1:00 AM

    Thanks!Very interesting theme!The life can be such for somebody too!

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